“A tulip doesn't strive to impress anyone. It doesn't struggle to be different than a rose. It doesn't have to. It is different.”

Home Blog Photos Video Music Calendar Reviews Links

Writer's_Block_Challenge#36_Two Souls (a poem) by Marnille

Apr 30, '08 10:49 AM
for everyone

Two Souls

By Marnille

Stillness of thoughts and mind

Thrust your body next to mine

Allow your spirit combine with mine

Reflect your soul into my soul

Let all creation freeze for a time

Let all our sound be heard in silence

Let river flow in tranquil motion

Reflect your soul into my soul

Sky is empty, sea as well

Together let’s fly, move our body in height

Go for a deep in holding hands

Reflect your soul into my soul

Now cease the moment

Contemplate by words

Thy body, thy spirit, and thy soul

Reflecting one perfect love…

Prev: Compilation of My Memorable Poems
Next: Writer's_Block_Challenge#37_An Ending by Marnille

reply share

16 CommentsChronological Reverse Threaded

lynnpolarity wrote on Apr 30, '08

nice, thankyou...

poetessgarden wrote on Apr 30, '08

very passionate!

sumaxmail wrote on Apr 30, '08

Sensuous, passionate and beautifully written.

qwith wrote on Apr 30, '08

This was a creative take on that picture! I found to be about intimacy on a deep, passionate level. Very nice!

richardssassykitty wrote on Apr 30, '08

This is very sweet and beautiful. Great job!

ethansdad54 wrote on Apr 30, '08

something is wrong up therer...everything runs together

ianelle9803 wrote on May 1, '08

Thanks for the great comments!!!
I really appreciate it!!!

scribe5 wrote on May 2, '08

very evocative. passion told delicately

spaceeagle wrote on May 3, '08

Interesting take on the picture, or, rather, what is not seen in the picture.

zeezeewriter wrote on May 4, '08

very interesting. I like this.. I read it three times. Thanks for sharing.

lolipoplullaby wrote on May 5, '08

very very nice..and also beautiful

bodomian wrote on May 5, '08

Very well written HOn, straight from the heart of the readers. can be a nominee in Pulitzer Prize.

bodomian wrote on May 5, '08

that's really love can do to everybody else...

blackvelvet1992 wrote on May 5, '08

Oh this is just brillant, love can be a beautiful thing when shared by the right combination of two people. Have a great day, Heather

ianelle9803 wrote on May 5, '08

My thanks again for your wonderful and flattering comments!!!

I'm looking forward for more challenges....

Thank you so much! my heart is jumping with joy!!!...i love you all!

gabkintanar wrote on May 13, '08

you looked deeply not only to the image but also to yourself, and indeed you found the right words. it was breathtaking and i loved it :)

audio reply video reply

Add a Comment

ianelle9803

Do you know Marnille?

Who is on Multiply?

Want to learn more?

Already a Member?

“A tulip doesn't strive to impress anyone. It doesn't struggle to be different than a rose. It doesn't have to. It is different.”